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I'll miss you

I'll miss you

  please do me a favor to traslate the following English to Chinese:

now it's time to say goodbye 
I'll fly away tonight  
I promise      
I won't let her cry  
I'll miss you   
can it be possible   
to be away from you  
you know    
for me you mean so much 
without you,   
life is just an ever ending emptiness  
I'll miss you    
can it be possible  
to be away from you    
it’s time to say goodbye   
I'll fly away tonight  
I'll miss you    
to live without you 
is as difficult as to live together
life can be so hard sometimes没
but, I don't know what to do  
but there is one thing  
I know for sure   
our destinies are left forever 
we'll meet again one day     
we'll start again tomorrow  
but until then    
I know for sure   
I'll miss you   
It'll be love again   
nothing would ever change  
it’s time to say goodbye   
I'll fly away tonight  
I'll miss you   

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now it's time to say goodbye             是时候该说再见了
I'll fly away tonight                             我将在今晚离开       
I promise                                            我发誓
I won't let her cry                               我永不让她哭泣
I'll miss you                                         我会想念你
can it be possible                                
to be away from you                           离开你,那可能吗
you know                                            你知道?
for me you mean so much                   你太了解我了
without you,                                        没有你
life is just an ever ending emptiness   生活只是一个曾经的结局罢了
I'll miss you                                          我会想你的
can it be possible                                
to be away from you                            离开你,那可能吗
it’s time to say goodbye                    是时候该说再见了
I'll fly away tonight                               我将在今晚离开
I'll miss you                                          我会想你的
to live without you                               过一种没有你的生活
is as difficult as to live together           一起生活本来就很难
life can be so hard sometimes             生活本来就艰难
but, I don't know what to do               但是,我不知道该如何去做
but there is one thing                          
I know for sure                                    有一件事我敢肯定
our destinies are left forever               我们的命运(在此或许翻译成"缘分")永远消失
we'll meet again one day                     有一天我们还会相见
we'll start again tomorrow                   那个时候我们会重新开始
but until then                                       但是在那之后
I know for sure                                    我确定
I'll miss you                                          我会想念你
It'll be love again                                  我也会爱你
nothing would ever change                 什么都没改变
it’s time to say goodbye                    是时候该说再见了
I'll fly away tonight                              我将会在今晚离开
I'll miss you                                         我会想念你

偶初试身手,希望能帮得上忙,偶只能做到译出大概意思了
若有不正之处,望版主大人加以修正,这样我也可多学学...
忽忽~~~

是歌词吗?

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谢谢!!
是歌词来的,
你翻译出来的意思也差不多了.
但是我觉得还应该有更贴切的,
不知你是否这样认为?
不管怎么样,依然谢谢你!!

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呵呵~~
很不错了啊!
至少我这样认为啊
感于说就好!!

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....(- -)好难听也~~

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想必像我这样翻译的大有人在,我只是喜欢做第一只"吃人的螃蟹",你说呢,小猪头?
既然你的看法是这样,那么麻烦你翻译一下下边这篇
http://bbs.mutouyu.com/read-htm-tid-1249.html
静候佳音

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我有一个朋友也翻译这首歌曲,我把它拿出来给哥哥姐姐们分享一下.
I'll miss you 我会想你
now it's time to say goodbye  是该说再见的时候了
I'll fly away tonight   今晚就要起程
I promise      我发誓
I won't let her cry  不让你哭泣
I'll miss you    我会想你
can it be possible   就想知道
to be away from you   能否离你而去
you know     你要知道
for me you mean so much  你对我意味着什么
without you,    没有你的生活
life is just an ever ending emptiness  只是永远的虚空
I'll miss you    我会想你
can it be possible  就想知道
to be away from you    能否离你而去
it’s time to say goodbye    是该说再见的时候了
I'll fly away tonight  今晚就要起程
I'll miss you    我会想你
to live without you  与你分开
is as difficult as to live together和与你在一起同样艰难
life can be so hard sometimes没想到会这样
but, I don't know what to do  真不知路在何方
but there is one thing  但有一件事
I know for sure    我心里明白
our destinies are left forever 我们的缘分已尽
we'll meet again one day      也许有一天还会相见
we'll start again tomorrow  我们再从头来过
but until then    我知道
I know for sure    我会思念你
I'll miss you    直到那天的到来
It'll be love again    当爱回来的时候
nothing would ever change  一切都如从前
it’s time to say goodbye    是该说再见的时候了
I'll fly away tonight  今晚就要起程
I'll miss you    我会想你

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你们觉得怎么样??
我觉得她翻译得比较贴切哦!

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我觉得太简单就没必要翻译了(别T我,555~~) [s:8]
失去了英文的原味.
像RADIOHEAD的歌词是绝对翻译不得的,他们的歌词那叫神话.
给首我比较喜欢的你们听,希望可以接受......他们几个都是牛津剑桥大学的毕业生,写得非常深沉.

RADIOHEAD的"aranoid Android",很长,耐心听才有味道.

http://www.tic.edu.hk/~s011108/RadioheadParanoidAndroid.mp3

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这个是歌词.含有大量隐喻和隐语.表达了一种对现实无奈的抗争...这个我也用不好词.
不说了,自己听.超越了语言.整个歌曲跌宕起伏.有种与现实完全错开的哀伤.

Please could you stop the noise,
I'm trying get some rest.

From all the unborn chicken,
Voices in my head.
What's that,
What's that,

When i am king,
You will be first against the wall

With your opinions
Which is of no consequence at all
What's that,
What's that,


Ambition makes you look pretty ugly
Kicking squeeling gucci little piggy

You don't remember
You don't remember
Why don't you remember my name anymore
Off with his head man
Off with his head man
Why won't he remember my name?
I guess he does


oooohhhhhhhhh
oooohhhhhhhhh
oooohhhhhhhhh
oooohhhhhhhhh
rain down
rain down
Come on rain down on me
From a great height
From a great height
rain down
rain down
Come on rain down on me
From a great height
From a great height
That's it sir,
You're leaving,
The crackle of pig skin,
The dust and the screaming,
The yuppies networking,
The panic,
The vomit,
The panic,
The vomit,
God loves his children,
God loves his children,
Yeah

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