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A long separated year, but a session of labor courtyard director big game as scheduled to, this to schoolmate who deeply loves the management without doubt is not unfolds the self-opportunity, simultaneously also is section of extremely travel. I very happy can have the opportunity to stand in here, also is honored very much introduces oneself to everybody. My name is Wu Huiyang, comes from Tangshan.
      My life maxim not easily gives up, otherwise sorry oneself! Because on the life path, nobody is possibly problem-free, but no matter meets any difficulty, the big setback, please do not need to be disheartened, we must believe, so long as pays can have the repayment diligently, on the young face should brim with the smiling face, the young heart must fill the hope, young we should never say abandon![p:1]